Thread:Buckimion/@comment-24342508-20180215191549/@comment-1244451-20180215194149

"Avery is also, as he puts it, "a responsible cocaine user". This, however, has been shown time and again to not be the case, as in several episodes of the show, he has been shown getting high off of cocaine..."

You went that entire paragraph without naming examples. If you are the fan you claim to be, you will need to research your subject better and name examples.

The detail over Terry's leaving is unnecessary on Greg's page. We already note that they were former partners and it is more clearly spelled out on Terry's page since it is about him. As much as you wish to detail things, remember that the target audience has significant attention deficit. Don't bog down in details.

Furthermore, don't plan on making a day of things. I get dinged every time an edit is made and you have already been put on notice that yours are going to draw extra scrutiny. I have better things to do.