User blog comment:Wounded soldier/this is my story/@comment-26009167-20151001193909

I know you asked for help with your writer's block, but I feel this is kind of a complete story all on its own.

If you really want to add something, perhaps describe how this girl maybe perhaps hacked and slashed back at the demons and overcame her sorrow. I say this because it feels like you've explained how sad really well already, and it might not fit to put more.