Thread:FirstDrellSpectre/@comment-25100807-20171119034231/@comment-24200891-20180704073753

I need some help. I'm making a short comic about Lincoln going to middle school with Lynn. I try to make funny dialogues, but I was never good at comedy. So tell me if this is even funny?

Maggie: What are you doing here?

Lincoln: This is my new school.

Maggie: Ehh, no we're schoolmates.

Lynn: [grabbing Lincoln's arm] Just ignore her, bro.

Maggie: Is that your twin?

Lynn: [annoyed] Twin? I'm 13!

Maggie: Oh? Then why are you so short and immature?

Lynn: [rushing] Why you little...

Lincoln: [holding Lynn] Just ignore her.

The comic is going to be shorter than my 1st comic https://www.deviantart.com/firstdrellspectre/art/Maggie-and-Lincoln-Body-Language-750703214