Thread:N∞bz/@comment-11124806-20130726221253

Wow, did you draw your profile picture?! That's really good! I'm only good at drawing anime, but it's still not as good... maybe you could give me some pointers some time...?

Anyway, my story is about an elf girl, named Emily. Long story short, she lives in a very dystopian society. Originally, there is the main story called "Nate the Great," and Emily appears as a helper-character. Basically Nate the Great is about a boy named Nathanial Waker that is a treasure hunter with his two sidekicks, Dexter the baby dragon and Sir Richard Butler III, a man that has been turned into a rabbit. Emily is the last character to be introduced. One boy, who appears in both stories, is named Jake Ferren, a boy that is part bear, and has a huge crush on Emily.

So, Emily's story is called "Emily the Great." As I said, she lives in a very dystopian society. The women rule over the men, and the only men that are allowed to live are put in structures where they make and forge weaponry for the women.

In this story, there are two clans: The Alphπ, and Ωmega clans. Emily is part of the Ωmega clan. The two clans are constantly at war, each divided by a border of trees, that make up Ilex Forest. Whenever a female elf reaches the age of 16, they are put into a war education group, where they pratice killing other things. Emily, at the beginning of the story, is 15, and about to turn 16 the next day. She had constantly been discussing among her sisters, Chrona (13) and Elizabeth (19), and a boy that she met through a broken bar along side of one of the weapon structures that she was going to sneak out of her villiage the night before her 16th birthday to try to put a stop to all of the nonsense that had been happening. The boy's name was Djon. He is 15, a couple months younger than Emily. Emily had met him when he was in the storage room to get supplies for more throwing axes, and he had noticed that the bars that kept him in had sunlight shining through them, and he had never seen sunlight before. Whiile he was enjoying it, Emily, who had thrown a fit, and left the house to get some air, came aross Djon. He immediatley thought he was as good as dead, but Emily, who has never seen a male before, became crious, and started a conversation with him. long story short, they became friends, and on the night of Emily's run away, Djon offered up a custom made bow and arrow for her to defend herself.

After the first night, she was fine, managed to kill a robin, and ate the eggs. Then, the night after, the shelter she had made for the night suddenly was smashed. To her surprise, there were about 3 Kinseu attacking her shelter, in search of food. (In my story, Kinseu are like the bigfoot of the forest, but are more common.) Emily had been practicing magic, so she tried to ward them off with a light spell, but it didn't work. Long story short, Emily tried to fight them off, but failed. Before Emily passed out, she saw a figure shoot the Kinseu, and save her. Then, there's this comic strip of the scene that progresses:

If you can't read it says:

Emily: (mmmm...)

Emily: (Oh! There's a girl here...)

???: Good. You're awake. drink this.

Emily: Um... excuse me, but...

???: ... What is it?

Emily: Um... Who are you... And why did you save me?

???: ...

???: ... They call me Vixen. As you may have noticed by my looks, I come from the Alpha clan. I also know that you are from the Omega clan, and tis is what they would call an abomanation.

Vixen: The fact of the matter is that I saw you fight, and use spells. Even though you lost, and I had to save you, you still fight very well. I need you strength.

Emily: Wait... So you saved me so you could USE me??

Emily: And furthermore, what are you doing out here, and what's with the outfit?


 * Vixen slaps Emily* Emily: AH!!

Vixen: Listen here, WENCH. From here on, I lead and I ask the questions. From the way I see it, you owe me your LIFE. Do you comprehend?

Emily: ... um... yes...

Vixen: Good. now drink up. You're going to need your energy.

I don't really have much after that... But thank you so much for taking your time to read this. :) 