Thread:Person-123987/@comment-8-20160713165533

Hi, I've moved your story to User:Person-123987/the story of BLOODLUST (creepypasta). It's not one that fits with Central's blogs, which are ideally about Wikia, Wikians and Wikia communiites.

I suggest you go to the Creepypasta Wiki. Among other things, they have a Writer's Workshop in their forums (my suggestion: more paragraphs! blocks of text are hard to read :)

Good luck with your story! 