User blog comment:Jambo73642/Grave of the internet/@comment-8-20160621154423

I think this is a creepypasta? If so, you should try The Creepypasta wiki. They can be a bit harsh about new pastas, but they do have a writing advice page and how to write a creepypasta. They also have a writer's workshop in the forums.

I hope you'll go check it out!