User blog comment:Darytyg123123/How to write a brilliant blog post, without tearing the hair off your skull./@comment-8-20160517174706

Nice blog :) Maybe I can give a couple of comments/suggestions?


 * 1) Have a look at your formatting, big white gaps look odd, and it's fine for the images to have text flowing round the,
 * 2) Be a bit more confident in your intro - there's no need to put yourself down!
 * 3) Unless there's a reason for it, you don't need to name your example, rather than "John" I would just call your example "a Wikia visitor" or something
 * 4) "If you can't say something, don't say anything" < the usual saying is "if you can't say anything nice don't say anything". I'm not sure how that fits in your blog, but it's just a bit odd to see it misquoted
 * 5) You have a typo in the last paragraph - "takedon't"

Thank you for writing a helpful blog like this :)