User:Emberpelt

Hi! I'm a BIG warrior fan and I am writing my own books, the Desert Cats. Heres the start of my first book... (I need ideas for the title and clan names.)

The she-cat dragged her sore pads through the burning sand. Her whole body ached in pain, she couldn’t remember the last time she had drank and she was beginning to wonder if she should carry on. Sand battered at her side and she was about to give in when she thought she saw a figure up ahead. She couldn’t tell if it was a hallucination or not but then the figure moved, its fur bristled as it let out a warning yowl, it was a cat!

The she-cat felt a surge of energy rush though her and she raced through the sand towards the figure then all of a sudden the tabby tom pounced on her and she collapsed as he raked her belly with his hind claws. ‘Please stop!’ she yelped. The cat who had attacked her stepped back, the she-cat struggled to her paws ‘I don’t mean any harm, please don’t hurt me! I’ll leave you alone! Just please, please don’t hurt me!’ The she-cat collapsed into the scorching sand. ‘I’ll get help, wait here,’ the young tom replied. The she-cat was confused, but didn’t object.

A few minutes passed and the she-cat started to worry whether the cat was coming back, the sun was slowly sinking into the horizon when the Tom came racing back, followed by another two cats. One cat rushed to the starved cats’ side, ‘greetings, my name is Moonwhisker, I am a medicine cat, what is your name young one?’ The cat asked.

‘A medicine cat?’ The she-cat asked, her voice hoarse.

‘Yes I look after my clanmates when they are sick or injured, this is my apprentice Scorchpaw’ the apprentice nodded his gray head. ‘Now, what is your name?’

The she-cat blinked, ‘My name is Storm.’

‘Scorchpaw, go back to camp and make this cat a nest in our den’ Moonwhisker mewed, then turning her attention back on the cat she was treating she asked, ‘Ok then Storm, we’ll get you back to camp, Thats from the first chapter. In the second chapter Storm is apprenticed. Stormpaw and Scorchpaw fall in love only Specklepaw loves Stormpaw too. I haven't really decided what to do next and I need help! Emberpelt will be one of Scorchpaws and Stormpaws kits. Scorchpaw is going to be Scorchfoot when he becomes the medicine cat and Stormpaw will be Stormstripe. In one of the later books Scorchfoot finds out that Moonwhisker is his mother.

Storm

medicine cat, turning to the young tabby that had discovered Storm in the first place, ‘go back to camp and fetch Storm some fresh kill.’ Specklepaw nodded and raced over the sand until he disappeared over the horizon.

The two she-cats padded slowly across the sandy landscape. As they neared the camp storm could hear delighted mews of kits play fighting and cats gossiping, they seemed so relaxed in this empty desert.

Thats from the first chapter. In the second Storm is apprenticed. Scorchpaw and Stormpaw fall in love, but Specklepaw also loves Stormpaw. Emberpelt is going to be one of Scorchfoot and Stormstripes kits. In one of the later books Scorchfoot finds out who his real mother is. (It's Moonwhisker) I really need Ideas though so please help!