User:Swiftcloud2

Swiftcloud's Eye Loss

A frigid Leaf-bare wind buffeted Swiftpaw's fur, making her shiver all over. Bramblescar's fur pressed against her was the only warmth she had. They were out hunting together, she loved him being there with her to comfort her. She knew that Bramblescar would do anything for her and she would do the same for him. She hoped with all her heart that she would be a warrior soon. She was only a llittle bit younger than Bramblescar. Shewas so glad that they are mates, he was such awonderful tom.

Suddenly, she picked up the scent of a rabbit. She stepped carefullyon the ground, her haunches low. Then, she spotted the little creature, sniffing frantically around the undergrowth. She took one more step and "SNAP!" Suddenly, her back paw felt numb. She whipped aroun, and saw her paw caught in a  trap, the teeth of it sunk into her paw-fur. As soon as she looked back in front of her, in a  flash of tabby, fur claws met her eye. Everything went black and she didn't remember anything.

Starclan help me! She thought.