Thread:Tupka217/@comment-25523075-20151116140916/@comment-1038387-20151117162603

OOh boy. Sorry, rewriting is not changing everyu other word in any sentence - especially since you use words that noone else uses. And most of the times don't even fit.

Rewriting text isn't supposed to happen at sentence level. It's at paragraph level, or even better, article level. I know because I totally did this for a living once. For three months, but still.

First, identify the as many of the Five Ws as applicable. Once you've narrowed that down, you've got to mold it into a draft. Once you've got a draft, go over it and remove everything that isn't necessary - either to improve readability or to weed out parts that aren't relevant to your purpose. Seriously, rewriting that bit of text there can be done in two or three lines.