Thread:Princess Callie/@comment-28088262-20140611184253

Hi Princess Callie :)

Thanks for your advice, I've edited the pasta theme recently and came up with a new one

You mind reading it and giving some hints and tips to improve? C'mon it won't take three minutes, I wrote this especially for an English assessment...Thanks so much

http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Losing_Teeth 