User blog:FantasyMagicLady/my first book (draft)

Introduction Mia is a 12-year-old girl who has recently moved to a new city trying to make new friends, despite having spent a four-month period in Turin. Now, in the big city of Milan, where she is bullied by school snobs Valentina, Jessica and Sofia, she meets Jacob Miller, an undercover agent, who must solve a dangerous mission on behalf of the mayor of Venice; but what do these two great cities have with each other? This is one of the many mysteries that poor Mia will have to solve ... Chapter one: In the crypt of Piazza San Marco. “Jacob Miller - said the mayor of Venice - are you sure of what he is doing? We both know that recruiting a girl could involve big risks, especially if we talk about her! " "I know, - he retorted - but it is the most suitable that has been reported to us by the spies in that area and also the best at lying, quite useful, isn't it ?!" That sentence echoed between the narrow walls of the crypt of the church of San Marco  (strictly in depth, compared to the area open to visitors), which the mayor had  recently transformed into the headquarters of the SAV (Società Autonoma Veneziana), a  super secret agency that " preaches ”the independence of the city and equality between the various social classes throughout Italy. "Okay - replied the mayor compliant - but if the girl refuses ..." "I'll leave her alone! - Jacob continued annoyed. The two made their way to the secret food stand that led to the kitchen of the “GRANDI SAPORI” restaurant, where Jacob worked undercover to spy on Francesco Buonavita, a French spy determined to take over the Italian government  on behalf of the mayor of Paris. The mayor came out of the kitchen followed by Jacob who said “Thank you for the  check, Mr. Mayor! I promise you it will never happen again! ”. "Not at all, Mr. Jacob, - replied the mayor so as not to arouse suspicion - please take a closer look at the expiration dates of the products you use, I would not want someone to get mercury poisoning, ha ha ha!" "Ha ha ha!" Jacob echoed, visibly irritated and offended. Mia had just got out of bed and went down to the kitchen to have breakfast, where her  mother was waiting for her to eat some rusks with strawberry and fig jam. "Well wake up sleepyhead!" Mom said as soon as she saw her enter the kitchen. "Yawn" was his reply. "Are you excited for your first day of study in the new school?" "Hem .. no!" the girl answered. “Hey! Hi girls! - said the father who had just entered the kitchen  - is Marcus still in bed? " he hastened to ask. "Yes," the mother and daughter answered in chorus. “Last night he played Fortnite online with friends until two in the morning! Why can't I do it? Anyway, I stay up late anyway, you know! " Mia said, spreading jam on a crispy toast. “How many times do we have to tell you, Mia  !? You're still too young to play online games! " Mom said. "Yes, - said the father - but if it can console you, know that from the next time on there will be a curfew for  video games that you will have to respect too, young lady!" Mia, sulking with her brother who had just got up, went back to her room and got ready to go to school. She left the house fully dressed and just hoped that the day would end as soon as possible. Looking at the GPS on his cell phone, he reached the school just in time for the first hour bell and, with a deep breath, entered the classroom. "Mya Gordon" said Prof Shamberry as she dictated the appeal. "Present" he said in a low voice so as not to attract attention. "Mia, please come here to the desk and tell us a little about yourself" he said in a sweet voice to the girl who was sweating cold from fear. "Hello everyone, - she attacked - my name is Mia and I come from Turin, a bit far from here, huh? - general laughter and snobs whispering to each other at  two o'clock! - Anyway, I hope to make some new friends. " and she sat down all embarrassed while the class snobs, Valentina, Jessica and Sofia, looked at her like someone who had just seen a clown fall from his unicycle. After the first hour Prof Angileri should have arrived to explain 12 paragraphs of geography but, fortunately, he had the influence and therefore there was a substitute with Prof Rossi. I hope you like my draft and help me develop it better