User talk:Shakuran13

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Do Me A Favor?:
Mind being a beta-reader? You're the only one I know (aside from Kill You and Reapear) from the DB Wiki to not hate on Yamcha all the freaking time. Now, I honestly don't care for the character, but I just started to write a story about his origins.

 Prolouge: Thrown With The Wolves

A young boy was just born. Unlike the other newborns in the Emergency Room, he wasn't crying. His eyes were open, but he wasn't saying anything. He was just looking at his mother with a blank expression.

“Can I have a mirror? I need to keep my performance up for my next magazine shoot.” The mother said, obsessed with her appearance. She was Hatt Effl Rsta, a famous model.

“Um... I guess... but are you sure you're okay? You never cried through the birth.” The doctor said, dumbfounded.

“Just get me the mirror.” Hatt said, this time obnoxiously.

“Okay...” The doctor said. What a bitch... The doctor thought to himself. “...But wait. What are you going to name it?”

“ His name is Sinrgi Rsta. Now go get my mirror, like I asked .” Hatt said, annoyingly.

 Spiteful woman. The doctor thought, with the same thoughts of hatred towards the model.

 After a few days of staying in the hospital, she went home with her child. She, however, thought the child was starting to look ugly. So, she decided to get rid of the child by throwing him into a pit of wolves.

 This, however, made him into a great man, who has fought for Earth on multiple occasions.

Oh, and I don't want anybody on the wiki to know about the story until I post this on DBFanon. You mind responding on here and not the DB Wiki? My heart's a broken stereo. Skipping beats like a broken <sup style="color:#CDCDCD;">metronome <sup style="color:#CDCDCD;">. 23:51, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin-bottom: 0in;">Thanks, man. You still haven't answered my question. Do you mind being a beta-reader? Like, for example, tell me about grammar errors, if there are some parts of a chapter (I'm gonna give you every chapter I make and ask you to look at it.) that seem a bit sluggish/bad, etc. My heart's a broken stereo. <sup style="color:#474747;">Skipping <sup style="color:#CDCDCD;">beats <sup style="color:#474747;">like <sup style="color:#CDCDCD;">a <sup style="color:#474747;">broken <sup style="color:#CDCDCD;">metronome <sup style="color:#CDCDCD;">. 23:58, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="margin-bottom: 0in;">Thanks! Gonna post it on the fanon wiki now. My heart's a broken stereo. <sup style="color:#474747;">Skipping <sup style="color:#CDCDCD;">beats <sup style="color:#474747;">like <sup style="color:#CDCDCD;">a <sup style="color:#474747;">broken <sup style="color:#CDCDCD;">metronome <sup style="color:#CDCDCD;">. 00:37, October 15, 2011 (UTC)