Thread:Fangusu/@comment-460966-20161123020609/@comment-460966-20170129161530

Overall, that's not a bad revision. This is something you should speak to Gogogadget831 about. I cannot comment on her behalf on what made her revert the edit.

Some constructive criticism: I liked the way the bottom paragraph was worded prior to your revision though. Too specific about the breasts. A passing mention, like the way we have it now, does the job just fine.