User blog:Berglund/Writers Help 1

Hello Internet,I'm Berglund and if I'm not scrolling on tumblr, watching youtube, or starring at anime boys in speedos;I'm writing.I don't really have a style as I feel like I should try to tackle any topic or any form.I've written fanfics, original stories,poems,what I ate for dinner....well,probably not that one but still.

I was writing these blog posts on a Wikia were a few were reading them...but not many.I've be debating for awhile if I wanted to move some over to CC and take some requests for Lessons or anything else.

So today is the day that I bring writers help to Community Central.

For this first blog I wanted to talk about the word 'Said'. Said is pretty basic, kinda like that kid living across the street who blasts music at 2 in the morning.When you over use said, readers will get annoyed. And then you will annoyed because they're not enjoying your content,people will defend the your lack of knowledge for synonyms and others will call you out for it.

It's like word war trenches down in those comments.

Here are 2 examples of one with said and one without said

Example one
I Rolled to my left looking at the blank white wall, the room was pretty dark.The other source's of light were the glow from Hinata's phone and the sun creeping through the cracks of the shades on the windows above everyone.

Sugawara happily skipped down the between the 2 rows of our sleeping team members

"Suga!" I said glaring at him,

"What?" he asked crossing his arms reaching his hand for the strung to open the blinds

"Don't you dare...." I said

Suga ignored me and yanked the blinds open

"AHH!" Everybody said as the light shot through the now bright white room.

"Good Morning Guys!" Suga said with open arms as he walked back down through the aisle

"Ukai say's breakfast is ready..."

Tsukishima blinked and slid on his glasses "I sometimes really can't stand any of you...expect for Marina."

"Thanks buddy!" I tried to thumbs up but I still lay in pain.

Example 2
I Rolled to my left looking at the blank white wall, the room was pretty dark.The other source's of light were the glow from Hinata's phone and the sun creeping through the cracks of the shades on the windows above everyone.

Sugawara happily skipped down the between the 2 rows of our sleeping team members

"Suga!" I hissed while glaring at him,

"What?" he asked crossing his arms reaching his hand for the strung to open the blinds

"Don't you dare...." I growled

Suga ignored me and yanked the blinds open

"AHH!" Everybody gasped as the light shot through the now bright white room.

"Good Morning Guys!" Suga projected with open arms as he walked back down through the aisle

"Ukai say's breakfast is ready..."

Tsukishima blinked and slid on his glasses "I sometimes really can't stand any of you...expect for Marina."

"Thanks buddy!" I tried to thumbs up but I still lay in pain.

Well...
I know I didn't have much in those 2 but Example 2 was better, wasn't it? That's because said wasn't in it!

I hope this kind helped you!If I should make more please leave a comment and i you want to request me to write something or want me to do a certain writers help then leave me a message on my wall

Here's a nice big list of other words!