User blog comment:Nikolai Banks/A Road To A Better Community/@comment-1142365-20141101173754/@comment-1038387-20141101181439

As for your advice... I'll be honest, I wouldn't have read this even without the bible quotes. It's Tl;dr. No layout, no headers, no bullet points, no summary, nothing eye-catching, just layers and layers of text. Ten lines in, it becomes a soup of grey squiggles. Whatever message you want to convey is easily lost.