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Ben  (a "Ben Drowned" story)

Ben Phillips was ten at the time. He was an average boy. I think I shuld describe him because most stories that have no pictures don't take the time to describe what said main character looks like. Ben had red fluffy hair, blue eyes, and was white with few freckles. Now let me warn you, I may come off as just a narrator with a fairy tale to tell but this is no fairy tale this is a very spooky and disturbing gives you the creeps (at least I think it will) kind of story. Now sorry for all the boring stuff I geuss I should get on with the story.

Ben was in class at the time drawing in his notebooks and being bored until the bell rang! He was excited today because well, today was Ben's birthday! It was also the last day of school. What he did not know was that it would the worst birthday (and last day of school) he'd ever have. Ben was going to the pool at his appartments for his birthday. Ben's mother asked the manager of the appartments if she could reserve the pool for Ben's birthday. The manager of Ben's appartments wasn't very nice so Ben's mother told the manager she would pay extra rent that month. The manager wanted one hundred dollars more in the rent bill! Ben's mother decided if that's what she had to do to make Ben's birthday his best birthday ever, she'd pay that hundred dollars more.

Now was time for the party. Ben and his mother got a table from the closet and headed down to the pool. Ben unfolded the table and him and his mother flipped it over and set ben's cake and present on the table. Then, Ben and his mother went back upstairs and got four chairs and brought them back down to the pool. After they set up the chairs it was time to wait for people. Ben's friend Jimmy showed up first but, the person who Ben was really hoping to see was the love of his life. Alley Jordyn. Alley didn't come. That made Ben pretty dissapointed. Ben and Jimmy then jumped in the pool. Jimmy suggested they play Marco Polo. Ben was fine with that. Jimmy was it first. Ben was keeping away from Jimmy as much as he could until something scratched him. He just geussed it was a dead bee or something. Then, it happened again! Ben started to get a little worried. Suddenly it felt something pulled him down. The pull was so sudden he couldn't think about anything but how scared he was. He began to lose oxygen. He was drowning!

Ben almost died automatically, like he just left his body. He then woke up. He was in his room. The only sound he could here was silence. Then he heard someone or even something talking to him. The voice said "Hello Ben." "Thankyou." "For what?' Ben said "For helping me." "What?" "You were so vulnerable." "It was the perfect time." "What do you mean?!" What are you talking about?!" Ben became very frightened. "What's your favorite video game?" The voice said "Why?" "Just 'cause." What's your favorite video game?" "Majora's Mask." I see." Well I hope to see you again."said the voice "Goodbye Ben." Ben then disappeared. He then reappeared in his favorite video game.

Ben may be dangerous but the thing that possessed Ben's body, is something much much worse.